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There is an explanation of what is coming up in the story. Gc1 (Gabriel chapter 1) and LTc4 (Luke and Twi chapter 4) are being written.

By the end of this chapter, Luke will have gunshot wound to the shoulder after telling Twi something she didn't want to hear.

In the next chapter, he will get shot at plenty, and get shot in the chest twice. He will then be taken in by a cave-dweller herbalist and his apprentice. Neither of them have a name, and the herbalist just calls his apprentice "boy." Living with them is ghost-boy Will. Will was a character in our second generation game, when Zora was my main character. He had an older brother named Jake, yadda-yadda-yadda. His cause of death was previously unknown but will be revealed in the next chapter. This chapter is going to be a little funny because of the dialogue. Well, funny to Selena and me, at least. We were the ones who had to play the darn characters! :XD:

In the next chapter, Luke will come back, to the astonishment of Twi, who thought he was dead. (You'll see why in the previous chapter)
He learns about her dark secret, her connection with Will, and why she became a recluse from Megan-Isabella's sister, Sahara. Sahara will be a character that will show up once more in the story as it has been played so far.
He doesn't tell Twi right away that he knows, but she eventually finds out.

In the next chapter, it is apparent that Twilight does not like Luke in that way.
Luke meets Kyla, and during the course of the day they get to know each other really well. In the evening, Luke kisses her and Twi sees. Five minutes later, she confronts him and he introduces his "friend, Kyla." Twi says something and walks off. I can't tell you every detail or you won't read it ;)

In the next chapter, we introduce Selena's character Douglas. He is also a bird-boy, and there is a small cave scene, and Twi confronts Luke about lying and blah blah blah. You'll have to wait and see.
I'll also draw a map of what the place looks like, so you know sort-of what I'm talking about. An aerial view.
Luke is jealous because Twi does not like him but is talking to Douglas a lot. So he goes and finds Kyla, and you'll have to read to find out what happens.

In the next chapter, something bad happens to Luke, and Twi has to help him. They form a tighter bond between them, and Luke says that Twi is his best friend.

There is more plot after this, but you'll have to find out. What I just wrote, well the events might be in the wrong order (one or two, anyway) and some things may have been skipped, but you can't expect me to remember everything.
Some things that didn't happen in the game I've been adding to all the chapters, but the events I remember are stuck to as close as possible.
I'll update as much as possible and use this journal as reference.

Tootles!
~Jadey


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